October 31, 2009

Haiga 282

Haiku by Susan Perry:


distresseddamsel said...

The picture perfectly shows the exact scene depicted in the haiku. Both are beautiful and intense despite their silent atmosphere.

Ralf Bröker said...

The artistic realization is wonderful. And I like the idea of the verse. But may I say that I have some difficulties to understand why the haiku needs "like" and "fingers"?

Best wishes

kuni_san said...

Normally, we try to express poetic content without using "like". In that sense, this haiku needs a little more polishing. I liked the image I came up with so I am showing it on this blog.