Haiku by Dorothee Lang (Germany). Artwork by myself.
Dorothee san sent to me this verse the other day. I am not sure if its senryu or simply a statement, but I feel that there is a "cutting" between the second line and the third line, which make it more than a statement, closer to senryu. In any case, I let you blog visitors to decide.
This is a rather challenging senryu to visuallze. My solution, as you can see, is to employ abstract art forms. I think it came out rather nice.
3 comments:
wonderful, the abstract take! i think it works very well - and brings memories of childhood rooms, the floor scattered with colored toys.
Love the colors, and abstract was the right choice. Really nice.
My challenge in haiga making is to find some image that has comfortable distance away from the content of the haiku so that each enlivens.
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