October 31, 2009

Haiga 282

Haiku by Susan Perry:


distresseddamsel said...

The picture perfectly shows the exact scene depicted in the haiku. Both are beautiful and intense despite their silent atmosphere.

RBroeker said...

The artistic realization is wonderful. And I like the idea of the verse. But may I say that I have some difficulties to understand why the haiku needs "like" and "fingers"?

Best wishes

kuni_san said...

Normally, we try to express poetic content without using "like". In that sense, this haiku needs a little more polishing. I liked the image I came up with so I am showing it on this blog.