The picture perfectly shows the exact scene depicted in the haiku. Both are beautiful and intense despite their silent atmosphere.
The artistic realization is wonderful. And I like the idea of the verse. But may I say that I have some difficulties to understand why the haiku needs "like" and "fingers"? Best wishesRalf
Normally, we try to express poetic content without using "like". In that sense, this haiku needs a little more polishing. I liked the image I came up with so I am showing it on this blog.
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