Haiku by Michael McClintock (USA). What is the differnce between summer moon and autumn one? I guess the former is sharper than the later, hence this haiga.
Fine Haiku. Written with an easy mind, drawn with a clear mind. Just read the book you published in the Hamburger Haiku-Verlag - good work as well, Kuni San.
Best wishes Ralf
PS: I found the navigation on your blog in Japan letters. A bit difficult for me, but I got it by looking for the number (of comments).
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it seems simple, but the haiku gives a few perspectives, kuni-san and an interesting note :)
wishes,
devika
Fine Haiku. Written with an easy mind, drawn with a clear mind. Just read the book you published in the Hamburger Haiku-Verlag - good work as well, Kuni San.
Best wishes
Ralf
PS: I found the navigation on your blog in Japan letters. A bit difficult for me, but I got it by looking for the number (of comments).
Ralf san: sorry about the inconvenience. I rewrote the letters i English now.
Terrific haiga, but then you are always good in capturing urban images in a clear precise manner that creates echoes.
all my best,
Alan
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Enjoyed this haiga!
top of the building
the moon plays 'four in a line'
with the windows
or shorter:
high building
the moon plays
'four in a line'
(my haiku written in spring)
Warm greetings to all,
Al
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