October 1, 2011

Haiga 663 Kuniharu Shimizu haiku

Haiku and artwork by myself.
As I write haiku, I sometimes come up with something that resembles haiku. The one here is one of them. I also made a graphic for it. I made "headlights" and "taillights" italic because they are in motion, and "a streetlight" regular because it stands still.

After many years, I am still not sure if this verse is a haiku. It looks like a so called shopping list haiku. Though I cannot name it, I feel some kind of poetic thing in it, and I think that is a valuable thing not to be discarded.

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